First of all, I have to say that I love this piece, for this character alone. You made her very rough, and very natural looking, which a lot of people really haven't been able to convey in her, and I really appreciate that. You also gave her a fairly heavy, big boned look, which once again I don't see too often, and it fits this character perfectly. Seriously, you deserve a lot of credit for that alone.
Honestly...The worst things I can say is that her face looks a bit off, and her breasts look a teensy bit lopsided, but that doesn't take away from the rest of it. You even did her hands pretty damn well, which is pretty good.
Like I said before, there's a lot of things you did...Just right that really add a lot of impact to this. Not only did you do the character right, but like I said, you made her rough and large looking, which is something you don't see in drawings that often anymore, especially anime stuff (not counting fetishist stuff, lol). I really love how it came out, and I'd love to commission you again in the future O_O. Thank you very much!
nope. not alone. I always have help. There's something about anatomy that I never understood, so I'm taking it in college ;DDD -coughIhavetoformymajorcough- But my two newest drawings, the body wasn't me, nor was the face.
But I feel like I'm getting somewhere.
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And I like it! And there's no fail here, nor did you mess her up o.o. Actually, you're one of the few that's done her fairly accurately, and gave her a kind of rough look, which I appreciate .
And thank you very much! Expect a critique later on!
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First of all, I have to say that I love this piece, for this character alone. You made her very rough, and very natural looking, which a lot of people really haven't been able to convey in her, and I really appreciate that. You also gave her a fairly heavy, big boned look, which once again I don't see too often, and it fits this character perfectly. Seriously, you deserve a lot of credit for that alone.
Honestly...The worst things I can say is that her face looks a bit off, and her breasts look a teensy bit lopsided, but that doesn't take away from the rest of it. You even did her hands pretty damn well, which is pretty good.
Like I said before, there's a lot of things you did...Just right that really add a lot of impact to this. Not only did you do the character right, but like I said, you made her rough and large looking, which is something you don't see in drawings that often anymore, especially anime stuff (not counting fetishist stuff, lol). I really love how it came out, and I'd love to commission you again in the future O_O. Thank you very much!
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